At first glance, this looks very good! Make sure to proofread it once more, though. In the Intro, I found "introduce new ideas for to audience". Does it make sense (and is it possible?) to name the pages something better than simply 1, 2, and 3? For the conclusion, why don't you write "In conclusion, Gladiator is..." rather than "So now we realize"?
At first glance, this looks very good! Make sure to proofread it once more, though. In the Intro, I found "introduce new ideas for to audience". Does it make sense (and is it possible?) to name the pages something better than simply 1, 2, and 3? For the conclusion, why don't you write "In conclusion, Gladiator is..." rather than "So now we realize"?
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